Saint Patricks day

WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

There was a boy called Patrick Mc Alern  he was born somewhere in Britain. One  day when  the sun was  shining  down on the water it made the water look like scattered diamonds all over  the sea.  He like to walk along the beach he liked to whittling his slingshot but he hated school. His dad was  a Roman soldier, stationed in England and the family was quite happy there., They're  was an day when he decided to  the go to beach he saw nice white stones then he froze on the spot. A black pirate ship swooped into the cove and went into the village  they kidnapped girls and boys sold them in Ireland