Saint Patricks day

WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

There was a boy called Patrick Mc Alern  he was born somewhere in Britain. One  day when  the sun was  shining  down on the water it made the water look like scattered diamonds all over  the sea.  He like to walk along the beach he liked to whittling his slingshot but he hated school. His dad was  a Roman soldier, stationed in England and the family was quite happy there., They're  was an day when he decided to  the go to beach he saw nice white stones then he froze on the spot. A black pirate ship swooped into the cove and went into the village  they kidnapped girls and boys sold them in Ireland

The Rocket

SPLASH! into the water. It was freezing cold. We had to race to the end. "I came first," said somebody. We got out, took the life jackets off and waited in line. It was a little bit cold. While everybody had their turn, the people in line were saying, "Fall! Fall! Fall! Everyone got told to stop. 

When it was my turn, I was a bit scared but I had a go. I ran and ran until I fell off, then I swam to the ladder and lined up again. Once I had another turn, Ashley told the rest of the people to stop. The other class was coming. 

We hopped into the small pool. I begged  Ella to come in and she said yes. We only got five minutes. We all  hopped out and got dressed. When we came out, we got a lollipop. We waited for a little while and I watched my sister. I was so excited until she fell. I was hoping she would make it to the end of the rocket. When we were all dressed, we headed back to school.